刚看了ecology筒子的翻译,3句意思基本ok,但有几个地方我有点不同见解,你看看不知有没道理,我没做过游戏汉化,所以有不对还请见谅:)
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5 h" J- X0 `& _, I U. hBerlin, apartment: Nina is attacked as soon as she enters the apartment. (还没玩游戏,如果Nina真的给人袭击的话,下面就算我白说了。不过从整个段落的意思来看,这里的attack解释成袭击可能不太贴切,我认为这里讲的更多的是心理上的,nina看到房间里乱七八糟,“心猛得收紧”类似的意思)The apartment has been ransacked. Her concerns about her father appear to be justified. (这句好像也有点问题,我估计得不错的话,前面肯定有一段说明,nina得知父亲那里可能回出什么事情,所以赶过来看看。但事情真如她所料一样发生了。“刚才关于父亲的种种担心似乎被证实了”,这样大概更贴切一点)But what are the burglars looking for? And did they find it, or will they come back again?柏林,公寓:Nina刚一进房间就遭到了攻击,整个房间也被仔细的搜查过了。出于对父亲的关心,Nina来到了这里。但是这些窃贼又是来干什么的呢?他们的寻找的东西到手了吗?还会不会再来呢?
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Berlin, museum: Nina wanted to meet her father in his office. But all she finds when she gets there is terrible chaos. What happened here?柏林,博物馆:Nina去办公室找寻父亲,却发现那里一片混乱。到底发生了什么事儿?6 a6 J6 ^3 ~- l+ l2 G; E/ K; J+ P
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Berlin, museum: Lisa's photos weren't as meaningful as hoped.(这句感觉就是这个意思,但可能这么翻更好一点:“Lisa的照片并不象预想得那样有意义”) Could the black robes be an indication of a sect? And what about the strange amulet one of them is wearing?Lisa照片的暗含意义并不是那么容易明白。那件黑色长袍会不会暗示着某个宗教流派?还有那人佩戴的奇怪护身符又意味着什么呢?
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