小伍也来请教一下翻译的问题...
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主角在一个铺满各色石板的房间里看到一首诗
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- E8 i, B% y: r3 aSails I have, but sail I don't, at least not on the sea
1 }3 f9 K2 R6 @$ e# }But round and round and up and down, working hard for thee2 t( ^. Y. O7 w2 p2 S" y
Grinding up with my back teeth, producing, as I said
6 u) e6 Q( _/ H, J% kThe main ingredient which you need to make your daily bread: c8 {' A1 R. V
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这首诗的直译没有什么问题 但是在翻译成诗歌的时候遇到了一些困难
: M' b3 _* D1 }: ~翻不出韵脚,而且这诗实际表达的意思也不是很理解...
' U/ Y8 u) b! a2 r& d6 o7 }" a前后文有一些主角通过颜色的辨别对石板和与石板连接的绳子的操作
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相同的问题下面这句里也有,是上文提到的诗的附近写的另一段话! Y+ J* o% T0 ~" m- ~
0 K( f: q; \& J8 ]In the air it flies, on the ground it lies, it adorns the trees, makes old men wheeze, on the stove it melts, from grey skies it pelts. |